There are many things about press releases that are bound to irritate. But being the patient kind, I have learnt that to survive, one must endure.
However, there are a couple of words found in press releases that are now beyond irritability. Look, perhaps I have used them in the past myself. But to my fellow PR practitioners, I would like to suggest the eradication of a couple of words.
The first one is “delighted”. Scarcely a press release goes by about some winery winning a Silver Medal at the Vladivostok Carignan Challenge without the accolade-garnering wine-maker or winery owner expressing how bloody “delighted” he or she is upon hearing the news.
A nun is “delighted” to have received a new habit from the Sister Superior. A member of the British Royal Family utters “delighted to meet you” behind clenched teeth when introduced to the manager of a charity organisation that produces prosthetics for gay war orphans.
But otherwise, who uses this word in natural, free-flowing conversation? Certainly not a wine-maker. The last time I heard a wine-maker use a similar sounding word was when one said: “I have de-lighted de braai, so bring yours glasses outside.”
When a press release goes into real gushing mode, we see the use of the word “thrilled”. Such as: “I am thrilled that we managed to win the Tasmanian Zinfandel Competition, especially as we were up against some real tough competition from Moldovia.”
Thrilled. Unless you are a real nerd, when would you use the word “thrilled”. Imagine two wine people discussing the week-end’s rugby: “I say, Basjan. How do you feel about the Stormers assertively imaginative forward play during the second half of Saturday’s match against the Chiefs?”
“Oh, I am really thrilled, Koos. It was frightfully effective, especially during the heaving close contact regions. Pass me another Organic Merlot, would you?”
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Another one excessively cropping up in wine missives is “smart”. This is a real poncy way of describing a wine without taking the effort to dissect the sum of its parts.
“So how is that botrytis-injected Chenin?”
“Oh, pretty smart, I think.”
As the guy from Windhoek says: “Keep it real.” Especially if you really want me to believe what is being written.
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